Could native speakers help me evaluate a short B1 audiobook sample?

Hello everyone! I'm working on an English learning project and adapting short parts of a book for intermediate (B1) learners. I'd really appreciate feedback from native speakers. - Does this text sound natural to you? - Are there any phrases that feel unusual or unnatural? - Is the language clear and pleasant to listen to as an audiobook? Please rate: 1. Natural English (1–10) 2. Voice quality (1–10) 3. Listening comfort (1–10) Any comments are welcome. Thank you! https://soundcloud.com/kate-809531465/sample-audio?si=828b513d533a4e378d38ceb4832fdfbc&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing